Sunday, 19 January 2014

Tumko Dekha Toh-2 Update 13

Update 13 :


Ram gets into the flight and settles down..Priya fills his heart and soul…her laughter, her voice echoes in his ears…His Priya…

Ram (thinks) A week ago, I was a different man- a man who was restless, who was filled with sadness, but life has changed. I feel as if the Gods have smiled upon me and suddenly I see beauty and sunshine all around. Priya, I just cannot bear being away from you anymore..haven’t we waited enough to meet each other? I want you to be mine forever. He takes his phone out and messages..


Ram: Will make you mine very soon…be ready darling.

Priya: (replies immediately) What did you call me? Darling???

Ram: Tho..kya hua..you are my darling. Aren’t you? Waise bahut jaldi reply kar diya.. looks like someone was waiting to hear from me..

Priya: No, I had my phone with me so reply kar diya..waise aapko kya..you just like to trouble me..

Ram: Haan haan phone saath mein leke ghoomthe ho..waiting for my message na?

Priya: Ram, phone bandh kar dijiye..your flight will take off now..

Ram: Darling biwi…meri khabhar abhee se rakhtee ho…mmmm I like it!!

Priya: Ram….

Ram: yes bolo kya baat hai..

Priya: I miss you Ram.. take care and bye and please call me ok?

Ram: (sighs and texts) I miss you too Priya..so jaao..

Priya: Neend nahin aa rahee..

Ram: Dream of me then…

Priya: haaw..


The announcement for switching off mobile phones comes and Ram reluctantly texts bye and switches off his phone.

Ram (thinks) Kaash, I could switch off my mind this way. I just cannot think of anything else.

Priya tosses and turns and finally falls asleep..a tiny beep on her phone wakes her up. She picks it..

Priya: Ram…aap theek thaak pahunch gaye?

Ram: (laughing) Priya…tum soyi nahin kya?

Priya: No, I slept Ram..bas heard the beep of the phone..it was close to me so..

Ram( softly) Kaash mein woh phone hota…

Priya: What did you say?

Ram( chuckles) Priya..should I repeat  everything twice ? Anyway go to sleep. I will call you later in the day.

Priya: Ok Ram..take care and take an off today..you must not have slept at night…

Ram: Priya…mmm..laughs..jaane do..I might say something…


Sudhir and Shipra notice that Priya is trying to be more chatty than usual. She takes her parents out for a nice drive. They can sense something different but do not ask her anything.

The Kapoor family are all excited to see Ram after a week..Natasha more excited than the rest of them. Vikram and Neha are also invited to a family dinner to discuss plans.

Ram: Ok folks..I spent a great one week in Kodaikanal. I met up with Karthik’s family. They are lovely people. Choti, you have made a fabulous choice. They are very close-knit and warm. Mujhe nahin lagta I could have found someone so nice for you Choti.

Natasha ( blushes) Thanks bhai..I am happy you liked them all. Did you meet Karthik’s di?

Ram: ( thinks) Oye teri..now how do I answer without letting others know..Priya…why did you ask me to keep quiet when I want to shout from the rooftops that I am in love with you!

Ram: Yeah, I met her as well..she is nice..

Vikram (raises his eyebrow) Nice Ram??? Then she must be someone special..

Ram( glares at Vikram) Shut up Vikram…

Vikram: oh oh someone is angry..

The teasing and laughter continue for a while when Ram suddenly says..

Ram: ok ok bahut ho chukka…well Ma and Dadi..we have to finalise an auspicious day for the engagement and the wedding too..please talk to the Pandit and let me know. I will start making the arrangements.

Natasha: Oh bhai…engagement haan kar lenge but shaadi bhee itni jaldi… Karthik and I want to enjoy for a while..abhi se shaadi ki kya jaldi hai?

Ram: (muttering to himself) tujhe nahin…mujhe hai.. No Choti..he is also settled in life and you have your career as well. Now that you have decided to spend your entire life with him..then why wait?

Dadi and KK agree..Haan beta, Ram sahi keh raha hai..Ram kal hee panditji se baat karte hain and engagement ki date fix kar denge.

KK: Ram, I think we should have the engagement at our farmhouse.. yahaan city mein nahin..and I will speak to Shipraji and talk about the arrangements.

Ram: Thanks Ma..turns to Natasha..

Ram: Vikram..Choti ki chehre pe kya raunak hai na? Haaye haaye I love this blush..arrey I never knew you could blush Choti.. They share a nice round of laughter and jokes.

Vikram and Ram start talking about work when Vikram suddenly asks..

Vikram: Ram…you look so relaxed and happy…something I should know about??

Ram: Vikram..aisa kuch nahin hai..I loved Kodaikanal..have also finalised on a beautiful estate..but Vikram bahut thak gaya hoon yaar..have not slept properly.

Vikram: Haan haan tu mujhe bhagaa raha hai...I know..anyway let us meet  at office. But Ram...

Ram: What??

Vikram: Kuch to hua hai and winks..

Ram: Vikram...get lost!!!

Vikram leaves and Ram cannot help grinning... He walks towards his room deep in thought..

Ram: (thinks) Priya...yeh kaisa condition hai?? Today is day 1 and already I am struggling to keep a straight face. Tum yahaan aaogee tho it is going to make my life so difficult..

He leaves Bansi kaka with instructions not to disturb him..

He picks up his phone and dials her number..

Priya: Raaam…I missed you all day..mann nahin lagta..how are you?

Ram does not say anything… he sings softly..


Tum Ho Meri Dil Ki Dhadkan Tum Bin Laage Na Man Tum Ko Hi Dhoonda Karte Hain Har Pal Mere Do Nayan


To Jo Nahin To kaisi khushi Mayusiyon Mein doobi Hain Zindagi Mujhe Tum Bin Har Palchhin Dasta Hain Soonapan

Priya listens to Ram’s soothing voice…walks to the balcony with her phone…her eyes fill with tears just listening to his voice..


Tumhe jo dekha tho palkon tale Laakhon Diye Se dekho  Jalne Lage Mera Tanman Mera Jeevan Tumse Hi Hai Magan

Tum Ho Meri Dil Ki Dhadkan Tum Bin Laage Na Man Tum Ko Hi Dhoonda Karte Hain Har Pal Mere Do Nayan


Priya: Ram… thank you..

Ram: Thanks for what Priya?

Priya: Ram, Itna pyar…I never thought I would experience so much love in my life..What did I do to deserve so much love Ram? Is this for real?

Ram: Priya…kya hua? Please wipe your tears…

Priya: How did you know?

Ram: Priya…I just know…look we are meant to be together ok..poori zindagi padi  hai..so much love, so much happiness ..whatever I do..it is for you..bas just be with me..don’t ever go away. With you by my side, I don’t need anything Priya.


Priya stands in her balcony…a cool wind blows, she inhales the scent of the roses and jasmine and walks into the house.

Ram: Acha..ab kaam ki baat karein? I have spoken to Ma and Dadi and they will fix a date for the engagement. We plan to have it at our farmhouse. I will tell you the dates Priya..please be ready to travel and meet your family…

Priya: Oh…

Ram: Hey biwi.. itna fabulous news diya maine  and your  reaction is just ‘ OH’! Not done Priya!!

Priya: No, Ram..it is just that I was missing you so much and was wondering when I would be able to see you and this is  great news indeed..can’t wait to meet my family..Aapne suddenly aise bataaya so I did not know what to say!

Ram: Can I take it that you can’t wait to meet me?

Priya: (laughs) Ram, we are acquaintances remember??

Ram: Biwi darling..just wait..you will pay for all this once we get married..

Priya: Haaaaaaaaaw Ram…dhamkee de rahe hain kya?

Ram: Priya….stop blushing…pata hai..I won’t say anything..bas you don’t blush in front of everyone ok?

Priya: Haan, par aap aise chedenge tho….

Ram: Priya..you wanted us to wait..so we are waiting..I wanted to woo you..that I am doing ..now keeping a straight face is your problem biwi…

Priya: Gosh Ram…aap bhee na...I am so nervous and you are joking about the whole thing.

Ram: Priya…don’t worry..this is our secret and frankly I am enjoying this…this is our world..just you and me.

Priya: Haan, but feel bad ki we haven’t told our parents..

Ram: Let me tell you..once Karthik and Natasha get married.. we will announce to the whole world ok..I want to marry you at the earliest..bahut wait kar liya..no more. But right now it is just you and me...and our love.

Priya: Mmm..

Ram: Priya, will tell you once the dates are finalised ok?

But pehle I will call your parents and speak to them…come soon biwi..your husband is waiting…

Priya: smiles..yes Ram… I will. You must have had a long day. Ab so jaayiye..good night.

Ram: Priya...so jaaoon?? But meri neend tho tumne udaa dee..what do I do?

Priya: Raaaaam...good night..

Ram chuckles...Priya...you are blushing again...I love it! Good night biwi. Will call you tomorrow.

The dates are finalised for Karthik and Natasha’s engagement…Priya is busy making arrangements to go to Mumbai with her parents for the engagement. She is happy and goes about packing for the trip humming her favourite song..


Aaj kal paaon zameen par naheen padate mere Bolo dekhaa hain kabhee tumne mujhe, udate huye

Jab bhee thaamaa hain teraa haath to dekhaa hai Log kahate hain kee bas haath kee, rekhaa hai Hum ne dekhaa hai do takadeeron ko, judate huye

Neend see rahatee hai, halakaasaa nashaa rehataa hai Raat din aakhon me ek cheharaa basaa, rehataa hai Par lagee aakhon ko dekhaa hai kabhee, udate huye

Jaane kyaa hotaa hai har baat pe kuchh, hotaa hai Din men kuchh hotaa hai aur raat men kuchh, hotaa hai Thaam lenaa jo kabhee dekho humen, udate huye


Shipra is talking to Ram on the phone about the arrangements..she has her cordless phone in her hands and walks up to Priya’s room…Ram hears Priya singing..he smiles…he knows she is happy …. He cannot wait to see her.


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