Sunday, 19 January 2014

Tumko Dekha Toh-2 Update 20

Update 20


Ram was very irritated. He walked inside looking furious..how dare he say that? He did not see Priya watching him!

Ram walked towards the stairs. Priya saw this change and just quietly followed him to the terrace. The laughter and revelry downstairs did nothing to change his mood. He stood facing away the door, staring blankly outside..hands holding the railing tight. Priya just stood watching him..she quietly went behind him and..
Priya: Ram..are you alright? Kya hua?
Ram turned around to see Priya. He looked puzzled!
Ram: Priya..tum kaise ?? Yahaan?
Priya placed her palm on his hand..Ram you looked angry when you walked inside. Bas I wanted to know if there was a problem..
Ram wondered what to say..
Priya..woh..woh..anyway doesn’t matter..He looked away looking sheepish. Obviously, he could not tell her that he came stomping like a 5 year old having a tantrum!
Priya : Arrey yeh kya baat hui..you came looking as if you got punched in the gut..aur gusse mein your face was all red..ab itney bhole bann rahe hain!! Kya hua boliye na..
Ram: (Looking Sheepish) mmmm sab tumhari wajah se..
Priya: Meri wajah se? Maine kya kiya?
Ram: Tum itni…jo ho..
Priya raises her palm and says..
Priya: Ram bas kijiye..bahut hua..kya ho gaya hai aapko? What did you call me at the entrance?? Cheeeeeee…koi sunn leta toh kitna embarrassing hota..
Ram: Hein ..ismey chee wali baat kya hogayi..meine pehle bhee kaha..you are my wife..I was just admiring you aur bas bol diya jo mann mein tha..and hello…I did not shout for everyone to hear.. sirf for you..toh kya galath kiya..
Priya: Ram..we are not married..please jab tak shadi nahin hoti please aap aisee baatein math kijiye.
Ram: (Holding Priya by her shoulders) Kya hua Priya..itna gussa? Priya we are getting married next week..but in my mind, you are already my wife. I love and respect you a lot. But I also find you attractive..ismey galath kya hai?
Priya: Ram ..I don’t know..I don’t feel comfortable.
Ram: Ok..ok nahin kahunga..Ram just turned away.
Priya: Ram..Raaaaam..listen na? Just a week more..I am yours na? Phir kyun gussa ho rahe hain?
Ram: Haan gussa nahin aana chahiye..duniya bhar ke log..na jaane..kya kya..
Priya: What duniya bhar ke log? Kisine kuch kaha kya?
Ram: Haan..woh mera naalayak cousin aaya na US se? Woh puch raha tha tumhare baare mein..
Priya: Acchhhhhhhaaaaaaa isiliye janaab itney gusse mein the? The guy in the dark blue coat!!
Ram: Tumhein coat bhee yaad hai?
Priya: (teasing) Coat yaad hai because mein soch rahi thee..this colour would suit my Ram so much..jab shopping jaungi I will buy for him!!
Ram( face bright) Really!!!!
Priya: Aur nahin toh kya..I was singing and dancing with the most handsome man..aapke alaava koi dikhta hee nahin kya karoon?
Ram pulled her to him and held her tight..Acha kya karna chahthi ho? Ya mein kuch…
Priya: Noooooooooooo Raaaaaaaaaam please chodiye na..
Ram: Nahin chodunga..admit it..you love being close to me..
Priya: Haan I love being close to you..Raaaaam koi aa jayega…
There is a cough and laughter…
Vikram and Neha stand there laughing..
Vikram: Aa jayega nahin Priya..aa gaye!!!
Priya moves away embarrassed..Ram is super irritated.
Ram: Yaar tu bada besharam hai..ainvayi tapak jaatha hai..haddi kahin ke donon..
Vikram: Oye..tu party chodke chala aaya..dekha toh Priya bhee gayab ho gayi..ab Priya ko protect karna thaa na..isliye hum log pahuch gaye..Woh kya hai naa..hum donon ne dekha woh entrance wala pyar, singing dancing wala pyar..romance kuch zyaada nahin hua?
Ram: Neha tere pati ko bol ki bahut interfere kar raha hai..pitega mujhse ek din!
Vikram: Ok ok…gussa khatam..actually we came here because we wanted to discuss the wedding arrangements with you.
Ram, Priya, Vikram and Neha sit around a small table.
Vikram: Ram ..you will announce your wedding plans after Natasha gets married. Natasha and Karthik are leaving for the US 5 days after the wedding..so you will have to get married before they leave..
Ram: (quickly) We will get married the next day!!!
Priya: ( wide-eyed) Raaaaaam..next day???? Poor papa will have a shock of his life..how will they arrange..shopping..catering..Gosh invitations bhee nahin print kar sakte..
Ram: Priya…Priya relax..we only need a Pandit to conduct the wedding..clothes shopping will get done..rahi baat invitations ki..it is going to be only both our families na? Koi zaroorat nahin hai..let us have a simple and beautiful wedding..Vikram just inform the panditji and make arrangements..mm I will get her mangalsutra and wedding saree..get some gifts for Choti and Karthik and also family members ke liye..I don’t know they might be a bit disappointed but this is how we want it to be- just personal and beautiful!
Neha: Ram..woh sab theek hai..honeymoon ka plan banaa diya kya?
Ram: Neha..chup kar..I have lots of work to do..have no time to take a break and travel overseas.
Vikram: Haan Neha..Ram has ‘lots’ of work to do..samjha kar…tu bhee na!!!
Vikram: Chal we will leave now..Ram tumhara early morning flight hai na? Chalo phir milte hain shadi ke din..phone pe baat karte hain..bye and good night..arrey donon neechey aa jao otherwise sab log mujhe khaa jayenge!
Ram: haan tum log jao..we will come.
Ram: Priya…are you feeling bad I won’t be here for 5 days? I will try and be back before Natasha’s mehendi..kya tum bhee mehendi lagaogi?
Priya: Mm thoda disappointed you are going away but its ok..zindagi bhar ka saath hai na Ram..I will wait. Mehendi..mm I normally don’t apply but iss baar karungi..aapke liye!
Ram looked happy..cannot wait to see you !
Ram: Priya..I maybe very busy in the next few days..but will finish everything and be back ok?
Priya: Ram..I will miss you..come soon..and Ram..can I buy your wedding clothes?
Ram: Of course Priya..issmey puchne wali kya baat hai..you choose ok?
Ram hugged her tight and released  her ..see??? Meine line cross nahin ki..but my patience is running out..just a few more days ok?
Priya blushed and said : Ok shadi ke baad pakka
Ram: Pakka kya?
Priya: Raaaaaam please…
Ram laughs ok darling biwi nahin puchunga ..chalo let us go downstairs log dhoondenge hamein!
Priya : Mm..I will go Ram..aap aayiye…and Ram..
Ram: Haan??
Priya: You are looking very nice in this Sherwani..Love you Ram..Jaldi wapas aayiye..I will be waiting for you.
Ram: Haaye haaye biwi ko itna pyaar..and see all this time tum meri class le rahi thee..you were also stealing glances!!!
Priya: Haan..I was ..but I did not comment!!!
Ram: Ok ok..this is enough for me that my biwi finds me hot and handsome!!! Chalo go downstairs mein abhi aaya.
Priya: Mm..par don’t feel like going…Raaaaaaam kal jaana zaroori hai kya?
Ram hugs her tight, cups her cheeks..sees the tears threatening to fall..
Ram: Arrey Priya…mein kahaan vanvaas ja raha hoon..bas I have some work..jo bahut bahut jaldi khatam karke aa jaunga..ok? No tears darling..
Priya: Mmm jaldi aayiye..
Ram: Priya..ek kaam karo..you rest these three four days because mmmm sone nahin doonga tumhein.. winks
Priya moved out of his embrace..Raaaaaaaaaaam aap phir shuru ho gaye!
Ram: Meine khatam kahaan ki?
Priya: Ok dinner lag gaya shayad, I will go down aap bhee aayiye..
Priya walked away..Ram whistles..Priya laughs and walks down.
Ram thought..How can someone love me so much that she cannot bear to be stay away even for a few days…he was lucky indeed..he felt guilty that he did not tell her anything about his plans or where he was going..but he wanted to see her face when he surprised her!
Dinner was on and the conversation was lively and lots of teasing..it was just close family and friends.. Priya was watching Ram..what he ate..she simply raised her eyebrow at him..he laughed and took some more julab jamun! Priya gave him an angry look..he pleaded with his eyes..
Vikram: Ankhon hee ankhon mein ishaara ho gaya..lalalalaala
Ram: ( muttering) Vikram maar khayega..
Vikram: chal ja aur ek gulab jamun doon? Dekhte hain kaun maar khata hai? Wahaan se ishaare dekhe maine..Ram yaar..teri abhi se yeh haal hai
Ram: Vikram yaar..teri biwi wahan se ishaare kar rahi hai tune nahin notice kiya..ab tu pitega ussey!!!!

The evening came to a close as the guests start leaving. The Kapoors thanked everyone warmly and lots of shopping plans were made..while all the talking was going on Ram and Priya were in their own world..It is not easy to say bye…
Priya quietly said: See you Ram..have a good trip…but thinking..please don’t leave me and go..I will miss you.
Ram: Thanks Priya..have fun shopping..thinking I’ll miss you too baby..I promise I will make it up for you darling..
Yet another trip..yet another separation…but just for a little while..for a great reason..

2 comments:

  1. awesome updates you portrait each and every emotional of ram and priya very deeply and very well.Eagerly waiting for the next part please update as soon as possible

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    1. Thank you very much Shweta for your words of appreciation. I will update the next two parts in sometime.. Cheers!

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